Linked Production Information

Summary of WWW + EBI of the presentation based on Mr.Bush's and other student's comments:

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One aspect of our presentation that was appreciated by Mr.Bush and the other student's was that we kept our presentation as simple as possible. This is due to the fact that our presentation included only key words in every slide we produced for each key concept (MIGRAIN). Therefore, instead of just reading of the board the other group members and I elaborated on these key words for a more enjoyable presentation. What's more is that in one particular key concept slide (the 'institution' slide) Mr.Bush and the other student's of the class felt as if though I had thoroughly explained and justified the group and I's decision to have the 'Channel 4' broadcasting institution distribute our '4docs' 4 minute long documentary. Unfortunately, one member of our group (Gurvinder) was not present to present his slide. This resulted in another member of the group (Sundeep) and I reading of Gurvinder's slide. Although this had been the case, Mr.Bush and the other students noticed that the slide held audience theories within it which were of great relevence to our linked production.

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One factor that could have improved our presentation according to Mr.Bush and the other students was that if we had included issues and debates relevent to our linked production. One paritcular issue and debate which could have been discussed within the presentation was that of 'moral panics' in society regarding teenagers. Another factor that could have improved our presentation was that if we had looked at the audience whilst presenting. Mr.Bush and the other students felt as if though we engage the audience enough to take an interest in our documentary idea. Additionally, what would have helped our presentation to be more appealing to the audience was if we had included pictures supporting the texts on the screen as these were lacking.